Monday, 29 June 2015

Sunday, 28 June 2015

My Completed reading



W.A.L.T apply our knowledge of the story by constructing a model 

Story ginger 
What is it helping :it is helping ginger because cose he can make new owners 

Who are you working with : I am working by my self 

What colour is ginger he is brown and ginger 


Thursday, 18 June 2015

Home work


Reading

W.A.L.T apply our knowledge of the story by constructing a model 

Writing

WALT write a persuasive argument of our choice
























Purpose: To argue the case or your point of view

Structure: Opening statement - introduce your point of view 

Body: Arguments - point and evidence (Be prepared to back up your points with researched evidence)

Conclusion - repeat your point of view

Success Criteria: we will know we have achieved this when:


  • we can state our point of view clearly in the introduction and the conclusion
  • we can back each argument with relevant evidence and detail
  • our argument is mainly in the present Tense
  • we use connectives which link our ideas within the argument: because, consequently, so, therefore
  • we can structure the argument using firstly, secondly, finally and making sure each point has it's own paragraph
  • we can use persuasive devices such as Statistics: ‘More than 50%.....’
























Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Reading - WALT be creative by making a parody

For reading ropu is making a "parody" Phoenix and i are making one of
all about that bass but ours is a funkymix and here is our lyrics so
far hope you like it.


lunch,lunch,lunch.  lunch,lunch,lunch  lunch,lunch.lunch  lunch,lunch,lunch

because you know I'm all about that lunch bout that lunch no treats
I'm all about that lunch bout that lunch no treats. i’m all about that
lunch bout that lunch no treats. I’m all about that lunch bout that
lunch lunch lunch lunch lunch yeah it is pretty clear i like to eat
food but i can eat it eat it like I'm si post to do coz i got that
food food that all the mouth crunch  and all the right food and all
the right apples i see the magazine uha working that food shop uha.


This is a little somthing to help you with parody well it is an exsample.

https://youtu.be/0jykIPCbhmo