Tuesday, 24 March 2015

Marae trip

Ok Marae trip

Are the events in time order? E.g.

We met in the hall...I was waving out to the children as the bus sped off down the road...When we arrived at the Marae, we patiently waited at the gate ... After the pƍwhiri I was busting to go to the toilet...

Is it in the past tenseE.g. Was, left, woke up, etc

Does it use time connectives?
e.g. next, meanwhile, within hours, soon afterwards, weeks later, etc.

Does it use powerful verbs? Powerful verbs can make your writing much much more exciting and dramatic!!

E.g. Grabbed          snatched           sprinted         scrambled          shouted         screamed     crawled     leapt          strode          yelled            exclaimed         glared

Is the last line linked to the introduction / does it have a good conclusion?

W.A.L.T write a thank you letter
Success Criteria:

Features of a letter
Is the letter formal or informal?
Is the address in the top right hand corner of the page?
Does the date of the letter come underneath the address?
Does the letter start with Dear… or another type of greeting?
Is the reason for writing clearly given in the first paragraph?
Is there a clear beginning, middle and end?
Does it keep the reader interested -using well chosen words?
Has the letter been signed offcorrectly eg. Yours sincerely, yours faithfully etc.

As we hopped in the bus there were children sprinting to the gate.They were saying hello. I was sitting next to Reagan I never knew that Reagan was sick . And I said hey Reagan you can sit next to me. Rosie said that is a good choice Issraa you're welcome. About 20 minutes later with a proud voice! We are there. As we got welcomed to the Marae. I was rushing to go to the toilet. I was shivering from the cold weather. We had to go in groups. After the groups we got inside at last. Then we had to do owner mihi. I had to go back because I couldn't sleep at the Marae. the  next day I went back and we went to the gorge walk .It was a long walk I was tired after that we went back to school. We got to play in owe  play ground.

Sunday, 15 March 2015

My goals for the Marae are...

Goal1: I have never Ben to the marae I am screed that it might be freaky 

Goal 2 : you don't do bad behaviour because they might say that oh they don't respect 

Thursday, 5 March 2015

Story telling

How Maui found his Father and the Magic jawbone.
I am working with Arisha and Caidyn! 

Monday, 2 March 2015

Have a look



Best friends W.A.L.T describe 
1 Riley: she always helps me when I am struggling she has dark eyes and 
Dark her 
2 Peara: she is always friendly and  never is mean she has light green eyes and she has brown Hera
3 Rosie: she is the best teacher she has her eyes like dark chocolate and her hears gust like dack chocolate to
4 Salah : he helps me when I fold down off the pool he is really funny and has brown her